I didn't receive any feedback on my first Elevator Pitch. Probably because the audio was so bad. However, I did change this time and added more details and activities and clarified that it had alcohol and had availability for men and women at different times.
Hi Brian,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your pitch! I think you did a great job coming of likable and relatable. It seemed like you were talking to a friend, that can make the audience feel more comfortable. To make you pitch more dynamic, I think you should go into a little more detail when describing what type of activities and competitions your camp will provide. Explicitly stating what is offered might spark some interest right away. Great job!